It was the summer of 1974 I lived in Trujillo Auto Puerto Rico.
I lived there with my sister Noella her ho spend Paulo and her two kid's Danna and Pablo. I was four ting years old. It was graduating that year. I was sow existing about graduation learning the graduation song , with was Today is me graduation and Aim sad to leaf it here today. I us to have sow much fun with my fiends Yolanda ,Walesa and Marisol. We were always together asking each other what we were going to wear for graduation. They would all take about what color of dress they would were and how they hair would be I would just lessen because I had no plains not noting what i was going ot ware or how my hair would look like. Because my sit er had no plain for me.
Before graduation we went to a park that had a pool with was tree to eight feet deep. we gate there at about ten o'clock and leat at five.
In does hours we had some barbecue they had some hamburger, hot dogs, pizza,frechfrids and for desert we had some ice cream. I was so happy that I was out out of the house. I wish I could stay here I would sad to my self. On the ride back home we all talked about graduation and how good the pool was.
Graduation day was on a Friday June Eighting and it was a hat summer day.
We all matted at school sow we cloud look at each other .
All my Friends had Flores in there hands with there new dress and there hair done.Marisol was wearing a black set of short back open with her hair up in curs.
Yolanda was wearing a white long dress with her hair up.
Walesa was wearing a baby blue mine dress with her hair down.
I Ware a pink dress and my hair up in a bond. Sow I wait to life the house with my nice Danna to be with me in graduation day. Because me sister Neila was to tire to come .
On the way to graduation I charge me hair and lift it down. When my Friend sow me they could not boiler what i was wearing, they sad your sister is not right.
So they pamper me so I could fell good . We graduated that day we had som much fun hogging and kissing each other and saying I see you on High School.
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Hi, Maria!
I'm glad that you took the time to post your writing piece on the blog. I really liked the details- knowing what everyone was wearing and how your friends pampered you on graduation day. The tiny details really helped me to envision what you did on that day- from the different foods at the barbecue to the fact that your hair was up in a bun.
Are you going to continue to work on this story? If so, the thing that was most interesting to me was the part about how your sister had no plans for you. How did you feel about this? I was so glad that your friends took care of you in the end and dressed you up, as it was your special day. Learning about how you felt about your sister's treatment would give a new emotional twist and realness to your writing piece. Just some thoughts...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!
Karen
hey maria:
interesting writing i like details and of course has a good memmories and can rememnber almost all that happened so keep with it!!!! and happy birthday belated so i see on monday ....
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