a sweet dream is like a like a rainbow different colors from the sky.
the ocean is like a crystal water shine through that wave deeply to the skin of the land.
i said wow look how beautiful it is .is't so precious than jewelry and is also smooths.
what is a marvelous work i said i never i saw a scene like this this is one of those.
ist imaginable and spectacular way the wind it so gorgeous and also blend with nature
at nigth time it we feel the breeze through the air people walking alone or companion in the street enjoy themselves people want to be out because of the whether is good i can't explain to you .you just have to be there.
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Hi Jessica!
Glad to see you on here! I'm happy you figured it out. I've never seen you use such poetic language before. You create interesting pictures in my mind when I read your piece.
My biggest suggestion to you is to go back and reread out loud exactly the words that you have written. Do you have extra words? Are you missing a word or an ending to a word? Does everything make sense? This is called proofreading.
Good luck! See you tomorrow.
Karen
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