Friday, February 12, 2010

awsome

my name is Jessica my mother gave me that name she name afther characther name was name jessica (guerrila & humane) to other's it a beautiful name, but to me it was just ordinary name.it a popular name it also translated in many languages


one dayi got curious I went to the internet type google click search and type in dictionary
i click meanning i type in jessica it came up with the meanning i found out it was biblical name
the name Jessica came from Jessie the father of David ,butnow i think name it's cool now knowing it has a meanning to it.

i don't think my mother know the meanning fully , but still i wish i had other then this even it eas
y to pronounce in many languages that is less work to do .also that's the fun part of it.
to others it migth be hard to write but tome it easy.

1 comment:

karen said...

Hi Jessica!

I love the way you expanded your piece. It is great. Your structure is also really clear and organized. Great job! I especially liked how you explained being curious in the second paragraph. I actually felt like I could see you researching your name.

Here are some editing suggestions for final touches: Go back and look for places to capitalize letters (beginning of sentences, I), and find places for periods. Put a period wherever you feel you would pause if you said that sentence out loud.

Also, here are some spelling words: awesome, character, gorilla, human, meaning

I'm so proud of how you have been working on this piece. I can't wait to see your final version.

Karen