I had written a story instead a sentence in the class today
I have started reading my sixth book since I'm taking this class,it really surpass my expectation,I would never conceive I could do this before taking the class.
I'm eager to learn and read as well as enjoin it.
I hate language inhibit me to find a job that is my passion just like what I had done in Beijing.
I like to work,it's not for supplement income for the family,believe it or not,I was a workaholic, got out my house at 9 in the morning,came bake at 2 in the middle of night every single day,no weekend,no holiday.
However,life is changing, and I derived happiness from what I have now,that could compensate what I had lost.
2 comments:
Hi Irene,how r u doing.i see,you understood the meaning and using of the these words,but first i want to say don't hate any language please and second using the word "compensate" in your last sentence do you conceive is it used in an appropriate way?Irene some one removed the comments that we sent to each others i dont know how and why. ok dear take care
Hi Irene!
Your vocabulary sentences are really good. Your use and understanding of the words is really impressive. I notice that you could strengthen your grammar (ex: verb tense- like thinking about if the verb was done in the past, present, or will be done in the future. -ed should be used on most past tense verbs for example).
Here are some changes for you:
It really surpassed my expectations.
Language inhibits me from finding a job that is my passion.
I derive happiness from what I have now, which compensate for what I had lost.
I think these websites might be helpful for you:
http://www.eslbee.com/verb_tenses.htm
http://www.grammarbook.com/grammar/subjectVerbAgree.asp
Irene, I was wondering: what was your job in Beijing?
Karen
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