Monday, February 28, 2011
New Vocabulary Words
The governing body of the athletics organization is having a dialog over Marine Jomes to find out if she uses a vitamin supplement or steriods to fortify her body that make her achieve so much gold medals. if found guilty she will have to forfeit all her madals. They found when someone notice her erratic behavior after searching her home, officials found extensive supplies of steriod, now everyone knows she did not play the game very candid.
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Hi Orlette!
This is a great story that makes clear sense. Here are some minor edits (I will type them in brackets).
The governing body of [an] athletics organization is having [remove "a"] dialog over [Marion] Jones to find out if she uses a vitamin supplement or [steroids] to fortify her body that make her achieve so [many] gold medals. If found guilty she will have to forfeit all [of] her [medals]. They found when someone notice[d] her erratic behavior after searching her home, officials found extensive supplies of [steroids]. [Now] everyone knows she did not play the game very [candidly].
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