On a warm summar day in, New York City summer school was about to start. for a young boy and girl named Benny and Jenny.
Benny and Jenny known each other since the first gade. At firt look they liked each other, but were to young to understand what these felling were.
So Benny and Jenny would pick on each other, fight and call each other names.
In summar School they shared the same class, in the hallway, Benny would look at Jenny. Wow Jenny is so good looking i wish we would go to a Movie sayed Benny to him self. One day Benny walked up to Jenny and said I would like to take you out. What do you think? Benny thinks to hersself in this really happening or am I dreaming. Benny hads start to swat, Benny paused for a monent. Yes sayes Jenny I would love to. That night the young couple were about to in bark on a joung of end less wonders of love.
On the firs date silence was a camfort zone for the two.
Two years later, They are getting ready for the junior prom. Benny is haapy. Wow I cant believe he's my boy friend now. OMG prom night sayed Jenny. I have the perfect dress and hair style. The two dance the night away.
6 comments:
really? i like it and the titlle is sound funny but i like so keep it....
That was nice story. And it was funny.
i like that piece you wrote
i think it was great
I especially liked the internal monologue and learning what Benny was thinking in summer school AND at the prom two years later. Very sweet!
You puppy is nice and I like your writing piece.
that was a very outstanding writing piece Maria.
And me Damian and Anthony are all very lucky to have you in our book club.
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