The sun shine on earth but not through me
the wave of the ocean is running smoothly
and the exotic animal such as the lion
zebra the prints are unique.they said the
lion is the king of the jungle not really
when it come to large mammal
oh something did happen suddenly
the temperature change it shock me
to the level that i could not speak
the wind is shallow and cold
the cloud change from bright to dark gray
is like thunder light is willing to hit the ground
but it does not matter i will still have my fun
today when i look up after the rain their a
the rainbow.rainbow make the sky look
clamorous and sparkle and it become
another beautiful but i will have my fun again
Jessica-
ReplyDeleteI love your poem. You have a beautiful style and choice of words- I can see exactly what you are trying to express. The poem really reflects your love of nature too.
I hope you keep working on this poem! I'd love to be able to know what I should hear, smell, and touch when I'm in your jungle.
Best of luck!
Karen