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Sunday, March 27, 2011
1) When my brother gets behind the wheel of his car ,he's a real menace. 2) She may have the diploma,but she still a naive young girl who isn't ready for the hard-core business world. 3) It would certainly explain the low levels of troop morale which have been reported on many occasions. 4) I think if the violence is too overt the romance is lost. 5) Never getting enough sleep undermine melissa health. 6) I have accidentally delete a file from my computer. 7) Are newspaper free to publish opinions or do they have to remain impartial. 8) Determine which features to use to enforce data integrity. 9) Although the website for selling video games looked like a scam, other said it was really legitimate. 10) He tended to be lenient toward the children
Hi melo, melo i love your sentences but make sure you finish any ideas you started.
ReplyDeleteHi Melo,
ReplyDelete#7 and #9 are my favorite sentences-- they are really original and interesting!
Be careful with your grammar and proofreading. I notice that a lot of your sentences are missing words. For example, "She may have the diploma, but she IS still a naive young girl who isn't ready for the hard-core business world." Also, "Never getting enough sleep UNDERMINES (you need the s!) Melissa's (you need to show ownership with the apostrophe "s") health. Be sure to read over your sentences to make sure that you always have the correct endings to verbs and nouns and that you didn't skip words.
Good luck!