Yeah, I know it's pitiful

I feel that my characters are either too squeaky clean or my evil characters are too obvious.

Or both.

I read about that in one of those Ralf Fletcher books.

I should have Robert woodstock pull out a gun and shoot George wilkenson.

Since he's such a cliche for a villain anyway.

That would be one less problem.

sigh...yeah

Oh thanks Karen,for the advice on my last writing peace draft.

Could you list the punctuation mistakes that I made please?