My name is Damian Vasquez I'm 23 years old I live in Brooklyn NY with my dad.
I'm the youngest of 3, my brother is the oldest and my sister is the middle child.
I like to be with family. Family is imprtant to me. With out them I wont be who
I'am today. I have two side of the family from my mom and my dad. My mom from Argentina, Buenos Aires and my dad from El Salvador. Argentina is from South America and El Salvador is from Central America.
I been to Argentina, Buenos Aires and also to El Salvador. I like both countries
because thats were my family lives. When I see my family from my parents side I feel excited because they live so far away and I dont get to see them that often. Sometime I communicate with my family online. I miss them so much. I do have a huge family from my mom side and my dad side. And some famlies here in North America.
I've been to Argentina, Buenas Aires this year 2009 and I loved it cause the
last time I went to Argentina I was 3 or 4 years old. Over there I got to spend with my cousins and my grandmother I had a wouderfull time there. In Argentina I ate lot of foods like blood sausage, beef, chicken, and empanadas and for dessert I had Dulce de Leche with Flan. It was really good. It was my best 3 weeks in Argentina.
Famlies are great to have especially when they are loving and caring. Do you have a big loving famlies like mine?
1 comment:
Hi, Damian!
I love the names of foods in your last paragraph in the body! It really gives color to your essay and helps trigger your reader's sense of taste. I also think that the last sentence, "Do you have a big loving family like mine?" is an awesome way to end your essay. It leaves your reader with something to think about.
I suggest that you leave a space in between each paragraph so that the reader does not get confused along the way. Also, is it possible for you to not center the piece? Usually, poems and plays have centered texts, but not essays.
I look forward to seeing your finished product tomorrow in class. Good luck!
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